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No, the project is just being worked on under a subscription basis, rather than open. 

Kinda wondering how ya do the sprites, they're pretty good.

A few things to note about what I'm writing in the Doc is that whenever I express something, I tend to exaggerate my feelings on what I'm talking about to help communicate an idea, because I have trouble with communication and find this to be a way to do it effectively enough, and the critique isn't against you as a person, just the game, and finally to make sure we both understand what I'm doing while taking notes, I act as if I'm replying to what's happening on screen, so it may get confusing as to where I am. Course, you'll be able to comment on what I say and correct me on subjects I may misinterpret or the like if you wish. This Doc I feel is gonna be a long project for myself, so here ya go.

Hey, Zenthicks, I'm writing a Doc, I have had a lot to say and wanted to communicate that for a while, would you be interested in having a link to the Doc?

vore?

Neat, keep up the good work

I enjoy

Thank you

Alright, thanks, cause I think a part of the game is unplayable for me due to screen resolution and the resolution of the game. It's not too big a deal for me, but I am interested in seeing this project. Have a good day!

Hey will this only be a browser play game, or will a few downloadables be available in the future?

Hey, I may play through your game again, and give my critiques on the writing and world building, and if I'm right, I will probably have to critique some of the more political sided takes as well, I made it clear I don't actually like politics, but you said it to me yourself, you're a silly leftist and it's going to happen, that's absolutely fine and I actually do respect it, but it is still worth critique, no idea presented isn't worth that. Last time I played was the trip to Japantown, so I'm curious as to how you've progressed the story or if you've even changed bits of the earlier levels. Just a heads up, I don't want to write another super long critique and annoy you in anyway, and again, I will also write down my positives too, if a critique is only negative, how would someone know what they did well, right?

Have a good day, see ya in maybe a few months.

(Also, if ya don't want my critiques this comment saves us both some time)

Ah, I just didn't know if there already was or if it was being worked on, thank you for the reply and have a good day!

That is all I wanted to know, thank you for your time

I think you are missing what I mean again, I specifically mean their body type.

is there anything more after the burger joint?

What I meant is, are the characters going to be more animal like in design, and while Braixen is an upright Pokémon, I was just wondering if it would be more animal like with the Pokémon.

I'm guessing it'd be more Feral type stuff, huh?

this is neat... Ow my fingers

neat

I'm gonna be honest, I was not expecting this to be good. In fact, I downloaded thinking I was going to go through a slog.

I was proven wrong within 2 minutes. The Character writing is fun, where most of our experience is from a plant-based creature, learning of a human capable of eating him whole. He's so unfamiliar with Animalia he doesn't understand that she's capable of digesting the guards she eats until he puts what's said around him together, and honestly one of my biggest gripes is that I'm locked in a room and not allowed to even get "come back later" dialog from the NPCs, but that's fine. So far, 9/10, that's my fetish, I will be watching for updates. 

Been following this project for a while, I think it's a worthwhile time, even if there's not much to do with it right now. keep up the good work!

1. Hit boxes feel rather inconsistent, as I've jump between flames multiple times successfully, but other times I do the same thing and fail
2. It feels unresponsive at times, It makes the hellish hitboxes feel even more irritating when I hit space and don't jump
3. It doesn't feel like you're getting anywhere when you shoot the demon's tits, as it's rather unclear if it does anything, it's the main objective and it doesn't even feel like it works. 

1.12, is there a way to survive the jogging pred?

the uh... the online version, you can't run and jump if you go right, but you can if you're going left...

Oh, this is still a project being worked on.

Is this still being worked on?

You know what, I respect it.  Thank you for the reply and I hope you enjoy making your game.

I feel like the game is a bit much, not in the fetish way, but in its world.

What I mean is, the aspects that I felt interesting about this fantasy world was partially bogged down by the real-world politics and pop culture. I get wanting to make something with inspirations you have in the real world. However, people play these games for entertainment, in this case the entertainment is clearly referring to. Comments about Vecna, the D&D rip off show Stranger Things, isn't particularly interesting or unique, especially since not everyone is interested in that show, and may even fun the show rather boring or annoying if they know what they're ripping off and reinterpreting too, to not be so enjoyable. That's just the pop culture, politics however are way harder to write, and write enjoyably to an audience, most people read and play things to escape their mundane lives, reminding them about politics can sour the mood to anyone, especially people who just want to play a game with their preferred fetishes, especially when it's not used to actually build the world, but taken as a joke to, and I'm not gonna assume your actual stances this is just how it feels, be superior towards. There are characters that feel like blatant strawmen towards your own beliefs, especially the very beginning with the conspiracy theorists who think the virus isn't real. At first that point is actually interesting, because who would believe in a mutant virus? I mean I'd assume there is real evidence, but everyone knows about clickbait and tabloids lying for more money. However, it becomes apparent playing further on, these people are kinda just those who denied Corona existed, don't get me wrong, I hate them so much, but I'd rather forget them while playing games.

I have positives to say too.

When you decide to make jokes that aren't political or including pop culture, I say it's actually pretty good, not the funniest things to exist, but definitely pretty good, some that gave me a chuckle would be the talk on why the Men's bathroom is abysmal while standing around in the Girl's room, turning Rip off Rip off Lich into a Clown was funny, and even though I did say I didn't like the political aspects of the Conspiracy Theorists, the tiny tiny face mutation did warrant a chuckle. I like how the fact the main character being Trans isn't a side element, it's actually used in meaningful storytelling between our primary 2 characters and is a good way to branch the metaphor to people who are unfamiliar with the concept, I've always loved media that not only makes the metaphor, but they take the step to show someone in that position alongside the metaphor (BTW, being Trans or having Trans characters isn't Political in my eyes, I find people who argue that it is are frankly morons, I'm glad to see Trans Rep, even if it's a fetish game). Sprite Face artwork to signify who's talking could use a little work, but other than that in the art, I say you did well, great even, most of the anatomy looks good (yes, even the exaggerated anatomy, I wouldn't get a fetish game if I wasn't into it). Actually, there is one political aspect I do enjoy, even though it may just be a minor joke to not actually care about, but the Capital vs Commune argument presented by talking to one of the main vendors in the game. I like how even though the main character says it's the best time to start a Commune the Vendor starts her Capital anyway, and it's not like there's no reason to not interact with the vendor either, they sell Lean (Meme humor ain't the best, but it's ok, nothing wrong with it), which is a Party revival tool, it's rather important if a particular fight is gonna kick you in the balls (and I'm not just talking about that fight). I actually agree, with small groups of people, I think that Communes work better than Capitals, because in smaller groups, people can communicate their needs better and distribution isn't that bad, unlike larger groups where people who have supplies can't actually work out the needs of others and people don't get new shoes for years. The main aspect I enjoy of this is that it actually doesn't take much of a side, we get to decide if capital is worth it, or later on, make our own chems, it's great! Combat feels a bit easy at times, but it works in its favor as vore is one of the fetishes you can participate in, having a hard fight with high numbers when getting your enemy low for the chance to eat them is kinda a drag, so it's good when there are fights designed for you to be able to eat and not (Though the chances to vore are a bit low... kinda showing what I came for, eh? Still a positive aspect). Oh! I nearly forgot; I actually like the world building. I have a love for desolate apocalypse scenarios, so I may be Biased. I like that most mutants aren't blobs, that's just a "default" mutation to explain common enemy usage. I like the mutations bordering on a paranormal aspect, it fits in with the unnamed abstract thought demon. I've already aired out aspects of the world building I don't like, where it ties itself to our world, it can make it dated or just be a part we're trying to forget when we're playing, but I like a lot of the aspects away from topical points, the dorms look nice, but most other places are run down and messed up, I don't think making fun of Walmart will get old, but that's probably because I was rammed with a cart as a child.

Overall, 7/10, mostly good, I do not expect you to take any of my critics seriously at all, it's your game and you design it however you wish and it's not even finished yet. I'm a vore enthusiast, I may just eat my own words later, lmao.